应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话等形式,它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容,还能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写,这也是考生对于英语传统文化
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应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话等形式,它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容,还能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写,这也是考生对于英语传统文化了解多少的反映。因此,考生应在临考前系统地复习各种文本格式以及打电话的规范用语,以做到处变不惊、百战百胜。
[例3]写一封信给你在云南省西双版纳市的笔友李帆,告诉他你很愿意与他交朋友,并邀请他到上海来旅行。
审题:该题要求考生以规范的信件格式来书写,并把题中所出现的信息点都涵概在内。建议考生可把题目中的信息点都一一划出,以免发生遗漏。
学生作文:
Lifan
Xishuangbanna Yunnan Province China May 25th, 20xx
Dear Lifan,
Thank you for your letter. I'm glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to Shanghai? I'd like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holiday. Shanghai is also a beautiful place. It is a modern city. There are a lot of interesting places such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road Walkway.
If you come here, I will show you around Shanghai. You can live at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. Let's be best friends!
Yours sincerely,
Xiaomin
教师拟评分:9分
[例4]写一篇题为"A Visit Toxxxxx"的日记。
审题:该题为半命题式作文。考生除了要注意运用正确的日记格式,还可根据自己的经验和熟悉程度来选择、确定文章的`主题.
学生作文:
May 25th, 20xx sunny
A Visit To Jinmao Building
Jinmao Building has Chinese traditional styles and it is also modern. It is the signal construction of Shanghai. It is located in the center of Lujiazui Financial Area. Our family visited Jinmao Building today.
The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of Jinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Building, and you will get some unexpected gains there.
教师评析:整篇作文主题明确,对于金茂大厦的描述也较具体,文中"the signal construction"一词是全文的亮点。但整篇文章的层次不够清晰,句子也以简单句为主,对于参观这一动词的阐述还不够充分。
教师拟评分:8分
Outline;1.a thing between my teacher and me 2.my feelings 3.show thanks to my teacher Keywords: learn English, difficult, encourage, thank Dear Miss Gao,
As you know ,I’ve made great progress with your help. At this moment ,I want to say “Thank you.”
I still remember when I began to learn English. I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried ,I still couldn’t do well in it ,I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as you knew it , you had a long talk with me kindly about how to learn English well. You always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress. Ever since then I have been interested in it and improved myself a lot.
Though I have to say goodbye to you very soon , I still think I am so lucky to be your student . I hope you can relax yourself and keep healthy. Best wishes to you ! Yours Li Lei
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